Talk:Cole mcgrath vs raiden/@comment-25656629-20160829171111

Needs some work, I suggest putting the actions in their own stanza instead of by the character, otherwise it could get easily confused for the combatant to be saying "Drew his sword and charged barbarically towards his foe."

Also I do recommend keeping an eye for errors when writing the fight, I did notice a few spelling mistakes. (Sudden capatilization, or sometimes the opposite)

Just a little constructive criticism, I don't mean this to discourage you from writing nor attacking you directly.